Barren Prayers
Barren prayers lie like a crumbling edifice interrupting
a sweeping green glade--lie chipped, cracked, and echoing in abandoned emptiness
as a forgotten abbey: vine-grown, encompassed in weeds and earth,
nested with birds and mice. Walls detach from roof, roof from shingle,
A door hangs by a single hinge. The stone wall of the abbey garden crumbles,
moss-covered and grass-covered, just a tracing slope above the turf.
Beside, worn headstones, etched with a cross, mark unremembered tombs.
Quaintly pastoral to an observing eye:
Almost serene, a photo-stop to cross off the sightseer's itinerary.
But the barren prayer heaves with life
like the barren tomb, and what was dead comes alive and enters
the locked and barred room, baring its scars to show its death
and prove it's no phantom risen, but flesh and blood anew--
having passed through the darkening river of death, parted
its waters, trampled its dry and stony depths to stand
now upon the eastern shore.
And he is dead whose prayers
must always be said only on the shores of living water.
a sweeping green glade--lie chipped, cracked, and echoing in abandoned emptiness
as a forgotten abbey: vine-grown, encompassed in weeds and earth,
nested with birds and mice. Walls detach from roof, roof from shingle,
A door hangs by a single hinge. The stone wall of the abbey garden crumbles,
moss-covered and grass-covered, just a tracing slope above the turf.
Beside, worn headstones, etched with a cross, mark unremembered tombs.
Quaintly pastoral to an observing eye:
Almost serene, a photo-stop to cross off the sightseer's itinerary.
But the barren prayer heaves with life
like the barren tomb, and what was dead comes alive and enters
the locked and barred room, baring its scars to show its death
and prove it's no phantom risen, but flesh and blood anew--
having passed through the darkening river of death, parted
its waters, trampled its dry and stony depths to stand
now upon the eastern shore.
And he is dead whose prayers
must always be said only on the shores of living water.
2 Comments:
Wonderful. Prayer seems like quaint sentiment to those who don't pray, something limp and useless. And the funny thing is-- like Christ when he brings a little girl back to life again-- God tends to WANT answered prayers to be understated, unhyped-- a secret between us and him. One day the world will moan for not knowing the secret.
And he is dead whose prayers
must always be said only on the shores of living water.
Thank you for this poem. I'm in a horrid season of a long unanswered prayer. Your use of the forgotten abbey was perfect...as sometimes I am most "dead" in that forgotten graveyard of religion. It is the "person" of Jesus Christ who gives life, not the trappings of this earthly monastery. Thank you
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